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will you help me? Inquiry (采购产品): will you help me? Will you help me? You don’t know me as we have never met but I need your help in revising my son’s resume! He is considering changing employers and has asked for my advice in bringing his resume up to date. Of course I appreciated the compliment of him asking for my advice but I fully realize that my “resume advice” has some age on it, so I decided to contact a few people that really does knows what an “up to date resume” looks and sounds like! So, if you would be so kind as to take a couple of minute and quickly read through the attached rough draft (with your correction pencil in hand) and give me your take on what “should be in an up to date resume” as well as “what shouldn’t be in a modern resume” I definitely would appreciate it. Here is the rough draft! Please be aware that he always undersells himself. What I am hoping for are the words and correct phrases, blended with his education and experience, which will make the reader think: “Boy, I’m sure glad I read this one!” Stay healthy and happy; and, THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP! A grateful Dad, Ed Zeigler efzeigler@cox.net ***** Mark E. Zeigler PO Box 11558 Tempe, Arizona 85284 480.266.4331 zedm@mac.com Objective I am looking for an opportunity in which I can demonstrate all of my abilities by consistently producing quality results while remaining mentally challenged. Abilities/ Personal Professional Experience Analytical and detail-oriented. Good written and verbal communication skills. Continually seeks new tasks and challenges. Desire and ability to learn and apply new Experience with Linux, BSD, UNIX, QNX, Windows, DOS, MacOS; Fortran, Pascal; TCP/IP, Ethernet; Photoshop, InDesign, Acrobat, QuarkXpress, FileMaker, Microsoft Office Suite, Material Control System (MCS) software technologies. Broad knowledge of data processing, transmission systems, and of computer software and hardware. Education B.S. Mass Communications, Middle Tennessee State University National Cryptologic School graduate, Goodfellow AFB Computer Science curriculum, University of Oklahoma CCNA certification (Cisco Certified Network Associate) Employment History Technical Advisor, Daifuku America Corp. Installation, commissioning, troubleshooting, maintaining, and retrofitting robotic equipment in automated material handling systems at major integrated circuit chip manufacturing sites. Electromechanical work. Parts ordering and tracking. Customer support. Production Manager, The Roupp Group, Inc., Architectural/Engineering Consultants, Chicago, Illinois Technical support and desktop publishing. Responsible for company-wide hardware and software installation, administration, training, upgrading, troubleshooting, maintenance, and repair. Designed and implemented local area network topology and back-up strategy. Developed workflow processes to improve communications and productivity. Developed database to improve client/project set-up, tracking, and bidding. Streamlined publishing and electronic archival procedures. Designed, created, and performed technical editing on Property Condition Assessment Reports for lenders, investors, and corporate real estate inventory managers. Assisted in strategic planning. Extensive customer service experience. Student Worker, Middle Tennessee State University, Murfreesboro, Tennessee Administrative assistant to Liberal Arts college (inter-departmental); reported directly to Chair of the English Department. Technical consultant for the School of Music. Technical consultant for Dramatic Arts Theatre. Master Control Operator for WMTS Channel 26. Served on Special Events and Fine Arts Committees. Full-time student. Communications Analyst; Signals and Imagery Intelligence, U.S. Air Force (Electronic Security Command) Managed and analyzed signals intelligence communications to extract, verify, and process reportable information. Coordinated with other Dept. of Defense agencies to enhance intelligence reports. Provided direct support to operational USAF and Naval units. Managed and maintained a network switching system, ensuring QC of data processing and transmission between local and remote users. Created a program that reduced the number of unnecessary high-priority messages. Supervised and trained subordinates. Top Secret/SCI clearance. THANKS!!! Ed Zeigler efzeigler@cox.net **** Hidden Message ***** Edward F. Zeigler 708 Mulberry Street Humboldt, KS 66748 USA Company: The Zeigler Company Title: Owner E-mail: efzeigler@cox.net **** Hidden Message ***** efzeigler@cox.net |
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